Resumania™: Would You Hire Candidate A or Candidate B?

Resume woes

Good resumes feature concrete achievements, not routine daily tasks. For instance, consider the difference between the approaches these two management candidates took:

Candidate A: “Sales manager. Initiated and developed new accounts that now generate 35 percent of team’s overall revenue goals. Monitored client relations and created a needs-assessment questionnaire that significantly improved customer satisfaction with our company.”

Candidate B: “Sales manager. Supervised staff, wrote reports, attended weekly meetings.”

Candidate A showcases how she contributed to the success of her organization, while emphasizing her problem-solving abilities. Candidate B offers only broad general duties that offer little insight into his ability to make an impact. Bottom line: Be like Candidate A. When writing about your professional experience, be detailed and tie responsibilities to bottom-line results. These candidates failed to do so:

“JOB DUTIES: Run errons.”

But not spell-check.

“EXPERIENCE: I have experience in customer service and multitasking while wearing many hats.”

Do you prefer baseball caps or fedoras?

“JOB DUTIES: Answer phones, file papers, respond to customer emails, take odors.”

A smelly job, but someone has to do it.

“JOB DUTIES: As an administrative professional, I coordinate meetings and assist security staff with badgering.”

A professional pest.

“JOB DUTIES: Communicate financial projections to steakholders.

You need to beef up your spelling skills.

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Resumania™: Polish Your Pitch to Get Hired